I believed that I don’t agree that the cause of children smoking after watching R-rated films. The cause of children smoking goes much farther than it is. Many researchers believed that it does have a further cause of the effect while the main point is about R-rated films causing children to smoke after they watched it. When children smoke its very dangerous for their body’s to handle and should never let them do it at all.
Reearchers's have been studying about the case of children smoking after watchin R-rated films, identifying the means on how its causing this. They have found that children at about the fourth and fifth grade children start going to watch an R-rated film. To find out why the researcher's have done a test by interviewing children of the exact grade on asking which movies of the most popular film cinema they have seen. At the end the results it is that most have been R-rated films giving the researchers more information on finding the results.
It has been told the increase of children of watching said film has more than the others causing more children to actually smoke right after. While this happen others believed that the source of this cause is not from films but it can go further. They believed the source could be from home or something else some do believed on this theory while others suggest the films are the cause of it.
I think your claim is alright because you are giving your opinion on it,Also giving your opinion that the problems starts before the adolescents watch “R” movies.
ReplyDeleteI think your claim/thesis is somewhat confusing because your saying that the problem is not with the adolescents watching “ R” rated movies and then smoking.
I think your claim/thesis are good and you’re explaining whats going on, and giving your opinions on the topic.
I can tell you have a claim, because your giving your reason that the problem starts way before the children begin to watch movies.
Your reasons connect to the topic and I like because your explaining that the children’s problems begin before watching the movies and its bad for them.
Your reasons are not hard to understand, you wrote what you thought was the problem and describe your thoughts in writing